Kudos to Kelly Lee

Hey gang,

This is Kelly's homework. One of the best I've seen so far. Hey you guys, you think we should have the most kudos award at the end of every session?? What should the winner get?? Please post your suggestions in the comments section.

Joonbug


1. Make sure that you send a proforma invoice when you forward your

products.

2. I've used "express.com" as my freight farward since i lauched this
business.

"Express.com" is our freight forwarder of record.

3. Gap has tons of goods piled up in their warehouse.

Very good

4. As a result of factory automation, productivity has drastically
increased.

Excellent (hey did you like find this in a book) or is this what you wrote?

5. They reached a consensus on the case in the meeting yesterday.

6. I have an appointment with my hairdresser today.

7. Why don't we not make plans for tomorrow night and let's play it by ear.

You can also say and "play by ear"

8. It costs a thousands of dollars for flim production.

9. You can pick it up by 3 pm. when they set down the load in front of the
building.

10. For the sake of privacy preservation, the governments prohibited door
to door poll.

Great sentence, but it doesn't fit the business context ;) Door to door is the factory's door to your door, such as Fed Ex or 택배

11. The company has chosen port to port delivery for curtailing the cost.

12. Please be aware of all the terms of the contract.

13. We will make our position clear in accordance with the result of the
pending diplomaic negotiation.

Good

14. They wrapped up the compact that has a good chance to generate huge
returns.

15. It seems that Korean governmet will resolve Northkorean nuclear issue

in a few years.

16. You should confirm the schedule before you leave.

17. I found some of the mistakes in the receipt you sent.

18. We haven't received any e-mail that we are supposed to have.